The Shop

People drive by oblivious to the fact that this is the last time they will see me. They are wrapped up in their own happy existence unaware of the hurtful words causing me such pain.

The crossing guard walks out in the street with her stop sign held high and motions me to cross.

As I walk past she says “Good afternoon young man. Nice day at school?”

I want to say “No, and I hope you think about me and get sad tomorrow when you read the paper” but I simply reply “Yes” and keep walking.

The last words were the cruelest. I came around the corner in the second floor hall towards my locker and I heard my “girlfriend” talking to a friend.

She was saying “Greene tried to kiss me last night! I had to push the doorbell to get my father to turn on the porch light to get away.”

I hesitated so she wouldn’t know I heard her. Then I came around the corner noisily to collect my books. I was devastated more because she called me by my last name than her dodging my attempt to kiss her.

Getting ready for P.E. the coach came to the locker room and told us all to get our jock straps on. I didn’t have one because I was so modest I wouldn’t get undressed to put it on. I had learned to make a big commotion like I was changing while covering myself with a towel. The coach stood there and made me strip in front of the class. It was horrendous! First the hair – chest, back and pubic – I was early through puberty compared to the rest. Then most embarrassing, I wasn’t circumcised. I wanted to vanish into thin air!

All I heard during the class was taunts about the hair. I dealt with it the only way I know how and made a joke about “You ought to see my mother!”

Word spread through the school like wildfire and I felt the stares and laughing all day while my crimson face burned from embarassment.

Block after block I replayed the day in my head. I passed the greenhouses for the last time. I crossed the bridge over the dry Rio Hondo and told it goodbye. I passed the old lady sitting out on her porch like she did every day and thought to myself not tomorrow or ever again.

The janitor at the grade school near my house was on the front steps leaning on his dust mop, smoking a cigarette.

“Hey kid, I still need some help after school if you’re ever interested!” he hollered.

“Thanks Mr. Chrisman, I’ll think about it” I replied.

“I could use a couple of you if you got a friend who needs some money too” he added.

“K” I shouted over my shoulder as I headed on home.

There wouldn’t be any help. That would be the last bit of ammunition the kids at school would need! God! That I was working as a janitor at a grade school! I’d be mincemeat.

Besides, in a few more minutes there wouldn’t be any more me to worry about.

I turned the corner on Michigan and looked down the block. What luck! The green Dodge was not parked in the driveway! That meant Papa was still out working. If he had been home filling the spray rig or unloading brush my plan would have been ruined.

I let myself in the backdoor off the carport and went straight to my bedroom. I put my books on my desk and thought about leaving a note. No, no note. That seemed so melodramatic. When I drank all the DDT I didn’t leave a note. Still don’t know why I woke up the next morning. I watched many a bug die when we sprayed them. Guess us humans take a lot more. But it sure is some nasty tasting stuff!

There was no thought of a note when I took all the aspirin. Again, I woke up. What a disappointment. I figured 10 tablets were plenty to kill a boy but apparently not.

But this time it was foolproof. I knew what I had planned would work. I just wanted out, wanted it over, didn’t want to deal with the pain, embarrassment, frustration – living. I just wanted to punish everybody for being mean to me!

I stopped in the kitchen and made myself a cheese, lettuce and Miracle Whip sandwich on white bread. Pulled out a Coke (6 ounce bottle) and stood by the sink eating. Finished my snack, put everything away and pulled the Shop key off the hook by the door.

Papa and I had built the Shop a few years back. More precisely he built it while I got in the way trying to hand him pieces. It sat almost at the back of our deep lot, near the alley. Pink stucco, flat, slanted roof, 8’ ceiling with electricity and natural gas. It was maybe 10’ by 10’, big enough to store some of the more dangerous chemicals we used and with a work bench for sharpening our shears, pruners and Pincor lawn mowers.

I let myself in and closed the door. With no time to waste I pulled up a 5 gallon bucket of Chlordane, sat in front of the gas heater and opened the nozzle. Instantly I heard the hiss of natural gas flowing. Without a pilot light the heater required you to actually light it with a match. That was not my intention today.

Two minutes. Three minutes. I could smell the odor but nothing else. Not dizzy, not faint, not sleepy – how long was this going to take? I didn’t have all afternoon!

I kept sitting, waiting and then I started thinking. Thinking about how they would find me. It would be Papa of course. He would come home from work and eventually come out to the Shop. He’d unlock the door and there I’d be on the floor – dead! I pictured the look of disbelief on his face. I pictured the cigarette falling from his…

Wait! The ever present cigarette! Oh no! This would be like one of those cartoons where the character opens the door and the burning cigarette ignites the gas and the building shoots into outer space! I didn’t want to kill him! That would take all the attention off me!

Well, so much for THIS plan. I lean over and turn off the gas. I slowly get up, careful not to scrape anything and cause a spark. I think good thing the window casings are wood as I slide them gently open. Then I slowly open the door and wave my arms to flush out the gas fumes.

After 15 minutes I slide the Chlordane back to its spot, close the windows and check to make sure everything is in its place. The door clicks shut behind me and make my way back to the house. My head aches. Guess I’ll have to take a couple of aspirins.

Papa comes home later and at dinner he mentions that there might be a gas leak in the Shop. He smelled some fumes and will check it out in the daylight tomorrow.

I help Mama with the dishes, do my homework and steel myself for another day at school.

© 2010. A work of fiction created by Michael T. Rusk.

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5 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. annie q. syed
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 21:04:53

    oh and forgot to mention:

    my favorite part is as follows:

    still don’t know why I woke up the next morning. I watched many a bug die when we sprayed them. Guess us humans take a lot more.

    🙂 brilliant.

    Reply

  2. annie q. syed
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 19:17:49

    hi mike….

    so these are my thoughts as a reader:
    – enjoyed the narrative voice.
    -great beginning.
    -nice description throughout.
    -great capture of a day.

    well done! 🙂

    I would continue reading…

    Reply

    • mikeysmuse
      Jul 06, 2010 @ 21:01:35

      Hi Annie –

      Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Your kindness is much appreciated.

      I read the piece again – using the suggestions you made – it helped tighten the narrative considerably! The edits have been incorporated and the story is better for it.

      Reply

  3. Marisa Birns
    Jul 06, 2010 @ 13:17:56

    Oh, the poor young man! He doesn’t realize that the school years are remembered as hell by all the people who grow up to be fabulous! 🙂

    Wonderfully rendered story. Great description throughout.

    Reply

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